Off to the Races :s:

This is a lovely piece of work that certainly shows a significant increase in your development of the workings of male and female anatomy, not only that, but this piece demonstrates an improvement on your understandings into character interaction and story telling.  What really strikes this piece at first is the improvements you've made to the body language and anatomy of the characters. It feels much more fluid in how the characters move and twist in motion and certainly amplifies the story aspect of this piece well. THe more realistic take on them kissing is designed well through the anatomy and as mentioned the way you've twisted the upper and lower half of the bodies is much stronger than before, additionally, other additions such as the position of the arms in how one supports themselves against the door frame and the other natural has their arms sway to perhaps soon to embrace the others increase the atmosphere nicely. It's these little touches that can allow for a concept to really shine and also give the viewer another focus to understand more about the emotions of the characters and perhaps if they both share a connection/story than just being romantic at the time.  These are little indications of your improvements as an artist and certainly growing in how to reflect more in your work through the little touches now than compared to older pieces of work.  Clearly you have grown a lot and have understood a lot more about how to express what you want to say within your drawings, connecting them through a song, film or just what you are feeling at the time.

Keep it up.